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Post by Chad Holbrook on Nov 4, 2007 0:05:47 GMT
YouName: Robbie MOOOOOOOOON (Moon) Most people call me Moon
Age: 13
Role-playing history: Loads. 
How did you find us?: ProBoards SupportThe CharacterName: Chad Holbrook
Nickname?: Holbrook
Gender: Male
Age/Year: 16//Sixth
House: Gryffindor
Blood Status: Pure-blood, mother is a Veela
Pet (if any): n/a
Wand Info (wood, core, length): Ebony, 12½ Inch, Essence of Veela Hair [[Bought on a trip to France when he was 9. Thinking ahead.  ]]
Patronus: Hawk
Celebrity photo:
Celebrity Claim: Alex Pettyfer
Physical appearance: Chad's hair is dirty blonde. He is strong. His eyes change color from green to blue-green to blue. His clothes are always "cool", in Muggle style, at least. He has many muggle friends, his neighborhood is filled with muggles.
Character History: Chad's mother is a veela and pure-blood witch, and his father is a pure-blood wizard. Obviously, Chad inherited his Veela characteristics from his mum.
Chad comes from a caring home, his parents were never abusive. They talked their problems out privately without argument. It seemed like a fairy tale until one day they started fighting over who drank the last drop of the firewhiskey and got divorced. After that, his father and mother were mortal enemies.
Personality (what type of person are they? Likes, Dislikes): Chad is pretty laid-back, until it comes to entertaining women. He loves girls and everything to do with him. He comes from french origin, but his english is very well. Sometimes he is what muggles call "emo".
Chad is also very courageus and brave. He will do anything that he is dared to do, as long as it is not extremely out of reason. He will fight for his friends and family, and for random people he doesn't know. He is more of a leader than a follower, and does not stand for treason when he is leading. When he is doing something, he usually thinks he is right, no matter what, usually.
Sample
[[As Ron Weasley on Accio Hogwarts]]
Ron walked down the streets of Hogsmeade and turned onto the lane of the school. As he was walking on the bridge, he thought he saw a dementor, but he just guessed he was relicing his past years at Hogwarts. He loved this place, that reason being why he was here in the first place. The red-headed boy kept thinking about his past years at Hogwarts, wishing he could have been here in his Seventh year. He was doing something for the cause, though; it wasn't as if he was sitting at home drinking butterbeer and going to Quidditch games. Quidditch games. He was now reminded of two things. His fourth year and joining the Chudley Cannons.
In Ron's fourth year, he remembered going to the Qudditch World Cup. The boy didn't get to go there, often, so he was very excited for the time. During the after-parties, the Death Eaters came parading through, destroying everything and everyone. And the Dark Mark. The Dark Mark was there, in the sky. He thought about another thing on his mind, something more un-saddening. That night ruined his would-be favorite time of the year.
The man was now thinking about joining the Chudley Cannons, his favorite profession Quidditch team. Keeper.
Ron was nearing the gates to Hogwarts, now. He opened the door the the school and dim light cascaded over him. Just as he was about to open the door the the Great Hall, he decided not to, and walked down the hall. Everyone was at the feast, unless it happened to be his kids making a new era of Hogwarts. A new trio. Not really a trio anymore...there was more than three.
He was in deep thought of the two subjects that dawned over him earlier. He heard footsteps, and looked up...Scratter the penises will run
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Post by Cécile De Volanges on Nov 4, 2007 14:23:58 GMT
You missed out Character History, and could you pad out his personality a bit please  You also missed something at the bottom from the rules |
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Post by Chad Holbrook on Nov 4, 2007 16:51:10 GMT
Is it okay, now?
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Post by Cécile De Volanges on Nov 4, 2007 16:52:53 GMT
Yes
Except you're still missing something from the rules
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Post by Chad Holbrook on Nov 4, 2007 17:21:45 GMT
Got it |
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Post by Cécile De Volanges on Nov 4, 2007 17:27:04 GMT
Close enough
The sentence is longer but I can tell you got the gist
Approved <3
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